Saturday, January 10, 2009

A Trip in Time

I now come to know, from a needle on my wall,
Seconds, days and years have passed.
Longing for the times I love,
A picture, a postcard and now myself at last.

In fond recollections of days gone by,
And thumpings of a reminiscent heart;
A breathless gasp and a saline stain,
For sure they reveal ; fate’s pungent tart.

I remember, innocent eyes that glowed,
And yes, the tiny nails I mowed;
I remember, inseparable sharpeners and broken pencils,
And also, feigned cries over fantasy tonsils.
I remember too, those colored school bags,
And skinned knees on spirited crags.

From days when my head was high
At a better toy or a flashing shoe,
Time has flown on fleeting sails
Now, toward forlorn lands I do not construe.

Forlorn lands they are,
Although here, a multitude is alive;
Each one in happy memories,
Holding on to shreds, of their childhood jive.
For we all, move on and march away,
But the eyes, the crags and the cries;
Immortal always and life itself, they always outplay.




11 comments:

Trinaa said...

niiiiiiiiiiiiiice...welcome back! :)

Allen's Grey Matter Inc. © 200...whatever !! said...

hey thanx pal..!
mere ko laga .. sab bhool gaye... ha..!

ohhh yeeahh.. its cool to be back..!

Unknown said...

awsum dude!!!
its ages after i hav actly read a poetry wid such awsum rhyming!!!

(obv poems oder dan mine!! :P)
retrospect alws brings out d best!! ;)

Anonymous said...

hey an awesome compostion...
kaha se churaya?? hehehehee...
JJ =D
ba its seriously a very touchin one..keep up da gud work =)

Unknown said...

here 4 first time... n m welcomed by a nostalgic composition which takes me back in time... loved it!

aki said...

wat a beautiful composition buddy

Anonymous said...

hey buddy an awesome piece...heard somethng like this after a long time....

Anonymous said...

Lovely poem! :) I enjoyed reading it.

Allen's Grey Matter Inc. © 200...whatever !! said...

@trinna : you gone long dear.. kaha hai.?? thax btw..!

@the infinity guy: one heck of a blog you have dude.. enjoyed 'surfing' it..

@vasudha : thnx buddy.. i classify you as a critic... 'good' from you is a big compliment..!

Allen's Grey Matter Inc. © 200...whatever !! said...

@dranzer:
@aki:
@shiba:(nai churaya.. sab terejaise nai hai)

thanky thanky..!!

Allen's Grey Matter Inc. © 200...whatever !! said...

Shubhi dear ur a sweetheart.. moreso while tareefing...!!